Monday, November 28, 2011

More Trouble Every Day (thoughts on 'the wild')



(This is an excellent video. Too bad it stops just as the jam is about to kick in, but you get the main theme and lyrics.)


After thinking about the wild for several weeks, writing some wild prose fragments, writing a prompt on the wild for dVerse Poets Pub, and then reading the poems displaying a wide range of reactions to and interpretations of the idea of wild, my mind is still churning with it. Is the wild nature, is it everything other, everything that is not us, everything we are incapable of being, that we don't want to be? Is it people going nuts? Is it the weird impulse to put words in italics?

"Wild" is one of those words that acts as an explosive in the mind, firing off ideas in every direction. If one of the primary tactics of poetry is to place a word or phrase in such a manner that it allows a refraction of ideas, then some words are inherently poetic. Wild is such a word.

Why then, in wanting to write a poem on the wild, did my efforts keep getting swept into the unrestrained flow of prose (albeit a poetic one)? My problem was, at first, how to address the wild. Should I stay on this side of it and offer a meditation? Or would this effort, like writing about madness, remain a description of rationality, of the familiar and tame? Should I use memoir, and recount a tale from a wilder youth? Or would a philosophical approach be more useful? - the explorations of a questing mind, alternately assertive and doubtful? Maybe a mashup, a hybrid text, my preferred mode, but that text has yet to materialize.

One thing I would not do: pretend to go into the wild. I would not attempt to evoke the wild through my manner of discourse. If there are wilds within me, and I think there are, let them come out in a way that does justice to the concept, that shows respect for the wild. I've never been good at playing games, and the idea of playing games with the reader is repugnant to me. If what I write remains unclear, it is due to my failures and insufficiencies, not willful opacity.


Maldoror and the Wild

Last week a fellow named John came to my post on Lautréamont and his views encouraged me to push harder for clarity on a matter that ties in with these explorations on the wild. The questions that apply here are on the unconscious mind, the practices of the literary Surrealists, and whether the unconscious mind can be equated with wild. Are we wild when we dream or engage in an unrestrained flight of the imagination? Are the thoughts that flit through our heads without our conscious control connected to the primal wild deep within us? Or is the wild closer to the surface?

It seems to me that the perturbing quality of these questions points to the wild as being at the root of our humanity. In grappling with such questions, the questing mind is in search of the root of our humanness. For generations we have been defining ourselves as beings apart from the rest, and even the most hard-core, go-green, animal rights types have to admit that we feel different, even if, hypothetically, we aren't. That feeling constitutes a reality of its own. The legend of The Fall tells us that far back into the ancient past our gradual feeling of disconnection to All (we call it "nature" today) in conjunction with our increasing sense of 'humanness' created a breach. We have never been able to heal this breach, not with God, not with love, not with art, and certainly not with science. I can't escape the feeling that many of our activities are motivated by the desire, deep within us, to feel the oneness with It All that we have lost, so long ago, and that many of our "wild" acts, resulting in varying degrees of self-destruction, are often due to the pain of disconnection and the misguided attempts to escape it.

I see the literary Surrealists, hot on the writings of Freud, in love with Rimbaud, as practicing the impossible with regard to the wild: they wanted to prove their sincerity with objective demonstrations of wild utterance, if the wild can be equated here with the unconscious mind. They wanted to break through, all at once, to a greater reality (surreality), as if automatic writing could achieve such a thing.* But of course it can't, nor can anyone ever provide objective proof of their sincerity. Faith and trust will always play a part in human interactions. Just look at the feuding that went on between the Surrealists - love speech followed by hate speech, in the group one day and out of it the next. The failure of automatic writing to achieve a greater reality is implicit in the very act of writing a manifesto, leaving the status and indeed purpose of the conscious mind troubled.

Not only was Lautréamont not a Surrealist, but his book, Maldoror, is against the basic principles of Surrealism, as defined by Andre Breton. And not only that, but the purpose of the book is to educate and instruct (and to entertain, of course) and as such succeeds where Surrealism fails on teaching us about the relationship of language and poetic utterance to the conscious mind. Lautréamont was a champion of the conscious mind, not the unconscious, and his "surrealistic" passages serve his demonstrations, which are designed to lead the reader to greater lucidity and conscious control. There is a point to the madness. That's the whole point.**

I have yet to study Jung, but from the references I've seen in my travels, he was concerned with understanding the so-called dark places in the human mind and heart, of respecting their reality, not denying it, so that in our everyday behavior we are not slaves to what the popular mind likes to call "wild" behavior. This is what Lautréamont is all about. But Maldoror is such an incendiary book that its lessons are not at first apparent. In addition it contains so many dimensions that the casual reader is easily dazzled or confused. I have repeatedly seen readers stuck in one of these dimensions, steadfastly refusing to budge, blind to all the others. I once met a famous member of the early New York punk music scene and we discussed Maldoror. I won't mention his name out of respect for the fact that our conversation was private, and he probably wouldn't remember meeting me anyway. He was convinced that the book was a primal scream of rebellion and rage - and that alone. With every point that I brought up to demonstrate that it was also something else, he only shook his head, "No, no," he kept saying, like an alcoholic in denial. Truth is sometimes so ugly that people have to build cartoons to protect themselves; they Disney-fy the wild. And unfortunately, the perpetual campaign to keep Lautréamont aligned with Surrealism only obscures his value, at a time when we could use all the help we can get.


*It is worth reminding ourselves of how Breton defined Surrealism.
** The careful reader will demand examples, and she should have them. Here is one passage among many, chosen almost at random:


Hitherto poetry has followed the wrong road. Raising itself up to heaven or groveling upon the ground, it has misunderstood the principles of its existence, and has been, not without reason, constantly flouted by honest folks. It has not been modest.... As for me, I would exhibit my qualities; but I am not hypocrite enough to conceal my vices! Laughter, evil, pride, folly, will appear each in its turn between sensibility and love of justice and will serve as examples for the stupefaction of mankind.... Thus hypocrisy will straightway be chased out of my dwelling.

I do intend to post an article the sole purpose of which will be to cite more examples from Maldoror and how they follow the theme of instructing us on language and the conscious mind.

17 comments:

  1. I'm only partially through reading this post, but I wanted to offer a suggestion on writing a "wild" poem. Wildness is in the heartbeat. It's whatever makes your heart race, makes you feel alive and energized, ready to run and maybe bite. I recommend downing a pot of very caffeinated coffee and/or exercising before writing. Make your heart race, and you'll find your inner wild.

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  2. Yes, a "connection to the All" is definitely at the core of wildness. I'm loving this post, Mark!

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  3. I also enjoyed the excerpt you shared, particularly "I am not hypocrite enough to conceal my vices! Laughter, evil, pride, folly, will appear each in its turn between sensibility and love of justice"

    You have given me a lot to ponder. :)

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  4. I gave you a mention here, Mark:

    http://iamthat-shawna.blogspot.com/2011/11/ts-eliot-intriguing-lines-of-poetry.html

    Come read some of my favorite T.S. Eliot lines when you get a chance.

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  5. i have yet to digest this completely mark...i will say it is cool when something like this grabs you and wont let go...chase it...have fun some creative things can really come out of it...

    also,you did a remarkable job on the prompt this weekend...thank you...

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  6. Shawna, if I drank the whole pot my fingers would be trembling too hard and fast to hold the pen or tap the right keys. Here's something I like to do though: after the poem is written, when I am getting ready to make the audio recording of my reading, I allow my stomach to go empty, drink a few sips of wine, then hit the 'record' button. If I read just as the buzz hits, it seems to help!

    Yeah Brian, it's like a pitbull. And thank you very much. As usual, I had a great time and hope others got half as much out of it as I did.

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  7. Yeah it was such fun, always interesting where one simple word will take you. I had like ten different ideas just as I thought about it, truly a strong word. Great tune too.

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  8. a few thoughts after reading this post three times over the course of today.

    First of all, I completely agree with this -"many of our "wild" acts, resulting in varying degrees of self-destruction, are often due to the pain of disconnection and the misguided attempts to escape it."

    I have not read Lautréamont but from your descriptions of him and the surrealists it seems that they both travel to the unconscious realms, however, unlike the surrealists who feel this is THE finish line, Lautréamont sees it merely as a necessary stop along the journey to "greater lucidity and conscious control" or the reconnection, if you will. Correct me if I am wrong, but is this along the same lines as - how can we know what true joy is without first experiencing pain and sorrow?

    It has been a long time since my psychology studies but I think your correct about Jung - again with the point that if we aren't aware of what exists in the unconscious parts of ourselves (wherein lies deeply rooted motivating factors driving most of our conscious actions) how can we fully appreciate, understand, and/or control our conscious thoughts and more importantly, actions?

    Your comment about your musician friend being like an alcoholic in denial is very ironic because I believe it was Jung who played an indirect role in the development of Alcoholics Anonymous. Jung recommended spirituality as a cure for alcoholism which is the whole basis of the AA program. Other doctors also knew back then that unless an alcoholic could "experience an entire psychic change there was very little hope of his recovery." One doctor (Silkworth) goes on to say that "something more than human power is needed to produce the essential psychic change."

    And this brings me full circle back to your thoughts on our "feeling of disconnection to All (we call it "nature" today) in conjunction with our increasing sense of 'humanness' created a breach….I can't escape the feeling that many of our activities are motivated by the desire, deep within us, to feel the oneness with It All."

    I agree that many of our activities are motivated by a desire connect with It All. The problem, as I see it, is that most of us are looking outside of ourselves for that connection, even for the It All itself, which I believe can only be found within - within that wild place we call the unconscious, our spirit, our soul. At the very least, our unconscious is the junction at which our conscious mind makes contact with the “It All” thereby creating connection needed for the psychic change to occur. Once the connection and subsequent psychic change occurs our wild behaviors (alcoholism is just one example) can be controlled.

    Finally, regarding your last quote from Maldoror - imho, the alternating presence between "qualities" and "vices" is why the breach you spoke of will never been fully healed in this world. It can be lessened but not eradicated.

    "Laughter, evil, pride, folly, will appear each in its turn between sensibility and love of justice and will serve as examples for the stupefaction of mankind.... Thus hypocrisy will straightway be chased out of my dwelling."

    hehe, I love that! It reminds me of a story I heard once about a church group who gave one of their deserving elders a pin to wear which stated how humble of a man he was. But, alas, as soon as he placed it on his lapel, they took it back ;)

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  9. Even though I'm at a remove from what you and poet colleagues have been working on here, so I'm going to come in from way out in left field, I love the idea of taking this single word, "wild" and digging into it. It is a word that flies out in a thousand directions, no doubt of it.

    Somehow, as I read this post, Allen Ginsberg's Howl came to mind--and on the heels of that, no surprise, Walt Whitman, with his own kind of wild).

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  10. Pat: Glad you enjoyed it - and the Zappa.

    Susan: Howl and the barbaric yawp, there are 2 examples of the American wild. Love them both, esp Walt. Ginsburg's readings are superb.

    Sheila: I'm glad you enjoyed delving into this post. For sure Lautréamont did not see drunkenness, diving into the unconscious (however one wishes to characterize it) as an end in itself.

    I've never agreed with the basic principle of helplessness behind the 12 step program, the whole god dimension of it. I don't judge others. If it works for them, fine. But I don't personally believe in it. So the change you refer to based on connecting to a higher power is not something I believe in. And Lautréamont didn't believe in it either. Your comment about the 'alternating presence between "qualities" and "vices"' in the 'Maldoror' quote is interesting. Lautréamont was just a boy; he died at 24, never had a chance to grow up and work these things out. He was a deeply disturbed young man, but also brilliant, so one sees the fire and lightning of opposites thundering against each other in his writing. He was also funny in a profoundly black way. So the passage I quoted, for example, can be taken at face value, but also with a certain amount of cheekiness.

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  11. Very interesting. I've been thinking about wild lately, though not very academically, I suppose. I think of wild as unfettered soul, and Lautréamont's quote, and your paragraph about not wanting to pretend to go into the wild, present issues I face almost daily in my writing. Exploring the unfettered soul, and expressing her for a readership with authenticity, is the call and challenge.

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  12. Mark,
    I understand and respect your beliefs. Your mention of Jung led me to the AA commentary which I used as an example that for me, ties in nicely with your thoughts on connection/disconnection to the "All." I think beyond that, it is simply a matter of semantics and my hope is that people, including yourself, do not become like your musician friend and say, "no, no..." An open-mind is vital when searching for the truth. Thanks again for such a thought-provoking post.

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  13. Meditations on "wild" and "wilderness" have been, for myself, among the most fruitful, as if the source of whatever creativity and communion I have with word and world occur in that forest, that sea. Maybe it has something to do with the polarity of consciousness, its fundamental need for a subject and an object, and "I" and a "Not-I." God is one way to go; the Beloved is another; Wilderness is a third, perhaps more unknowable than the first two and thus more godly and beloved. (Though I think there is plenty of wilderness to god and my beloved.) The unconscious IS a wild place; Jung was a Cousteau at diving down in it; his recently-published Red Book is a much of a work of an angel as the Book of Kells (I wrote a bit about Jung's dive into the dark the other day in my post "A Stairway to Heaven"); Emerson, that bookish nerd, understood well the wilderness connection with what he hadn't said yet, knew he must keep a back door open to it (In an 1842 journal he wrote, "Wisdom consists in keeping the soul liquid ... There must be the Abyss, Nyx, and Chaos, out of which all things come, and they must never be far off. Cut off the connection between any of our works and this dread origin, and the work is shallow and unsatisfying."). Wendell Berry in "The Peace of Wild Things" found the best place for a vexed mind to be in a body laying in a pool in the woods, soaking in wilderness. Jay Griffiths has a great, extended prose meditation on this in her recent book Wild, traveling to wild destinations around the world and trying to frame that term in a bestiary of experiences. The writers I admire most have the wildest language -- Joyce (especially in Finnegans Wake, Faulkner, Melville, Cormac McCarthy (esp. Blood Meridean. It's why I love noir and a nekyia and immrama, wild terms for the sense that comes from repeatedly trying, and failing, and trying again, to come up with sufficient names for immensity, augment, awe and awfulness. The tongue does get supercharged having shared that salt lick. Nothing worse than poems that drone in what Rilke called "heated rooms and narrow metaphors"; his panther may be caged, but its eye still can devour us through the bars. If we write it. Eric Neumann believed that humankind had become over-conscious, too brightly lit with itself; without some attempt to mediate that light with the dark dreamtime we emerged from, we were in danger of becoming self-inflated talking balloons, drifting off to nowhere. Every generation is tasked with finding wilderness outside the canonical conventions it was raised in; Wordsworth was a free radical as much as the Surrealists. Great mediation, Mark. Keep rowing. - Brendan

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  14. .. Oh yeah, and how can I forget Annie Proulx? Nothing like her steely, relentless, unbordered Wyoming wind.

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  15. Ruth & Brendan: Thanks for stopping by and sharing your thoughts. I appreciate you guys. Brendan, you have once again given me some intriguing leads. Think I'll check out 'Blood Meridian' and I like the the Neumann paraphrase.

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  16. A brilliant and fascinating article, Mark. You illuminate my attraction to Rilke and why at times I feel the need to contradict him in one of my "variations," as I call them. I think in many respects we bear shame over our inherent and natural wildness-- shame that does seem to originate in the terribly oppressive idea-- to me-- that humankind is fallen, which of course justifies the notion perpetuated in Christian doctrine that we must be saved and matters put right by the so-called "perfect and living sacrifice." I prayed at the altar of guilt for many years, guilt and shame at being human, finding great fault with myself, shaming others then because somehow it seemed we needed to transcend our natures. We have become so self-estranged, afraid of our wildness and afraid therefore to live fully. I find I am living the most fully although I am stapled to a wheelchair, when I am writing; somehow when we are articulating we are reclaiming personal power. xxxj

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  17. Scrolling through the comments I want to add that when I fettered my psyche to AA and Twelve Step dogma, I was lost, and nearly died. A psychic change brought about by a "higher power"-- get thee behind me, anathema. xxxj

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